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Rhyme like a dime!

  • Writer: Keith Vaquis
    Keith Vaquis
  • Oct 19, 2019
  • 3 min read



Poetry is needed for stories to be told to children in a free-flowing form. Poetry is a precise form of language, with the use of imagery, feelings, and qualities of sound (Temple, Martinez, and Yokota, 2019). Poetry provides its audience with a story that can be told with a few verses that have a theme that can be relatable to some who read it. Like in “Where the Sidewalk Ends” by Shel Silverstein (2002), the poem “I Must Remember” provides the audience with stories of the food that is typically eating during some of the big American holidays - Thanksgiving, Christmas, and Easter – and days - Sunday, Friday, and Monday (p.14). The poem is told in the form of a narrative – being passed down from generation to generation – and tells the stories of the food that is typically eating during these holidays and days that follow (Temple et al., 2019). Stories all always told from person to person and does not require text. These narratives are told from those who are older and continue when children tell these stories to one another. It is critical that teachers incorporate poetry into their classrooms so that children are exposed to these forms of narratives through poetry and know that they can create poetry themselves. The interesting part of this poem, “I Must Remember”, is that the poem provides humor (Temple et al., 2019). Humor appeals to children. In this poem, the person at all the food that is typically eaten during holidays in one day - sheesh, how could he?!


What comes to mind when you think about the Fourth of July? Fireworks! As Silverstein (2002) describes, “...CRASH!...BASH!...BANG!...ZANG!...WHOOSH!...BAROOOM! ...WHEW!” (p. 15). This is what you think about when you know the American holiday is approaching. The sounds and lights that the fireworks produce are exemplified in Silverstein’s poem, “THE FOURTH”. The imagery and the qualities of sounds are brought to life in this poem – poetry is crafted towards a keen ear for sound and that is why it is usually best to read to poem aloud (Temple et al., 2019). You can imagine what fireworks are making these sounds and what colors are coming to mind as you read this poem. The poem also appeals to feelings (Temple et al., 2019). As Silverstein described, “Oh…my…it’s…the…Fourth…of…July” (p. 15). It appeals to the audience’s feelings with how the words are written – “oh my”, making it seem as if this is the holiday to be celebrating. Silverstein cleverly wrote some words in capital letters and some in lower-case letters to get different meanings out to the audience. It provides those reading with two different senses when reading the poem.


Poetry usually rhymes, but it does not have to. In the poem, “THE LOSER”, Silverstein (2002) creates a rhythmic flow in his verses. Verse after verse, the stanzas are rhyming with one another – the pattern is stressed and unstressed – and it is the beat of the poem (Temple et al., 2019). The rhythm is slow and can be easily followed even though a narrative is being presented if someone “loses their head”. You can think about losing your head if you are not thinking about what you are doing. You need your head to control you’re the function of the body, and, if your head isn’t fastened on, you will just sit on a rock (Silverstein, 2002). Think about it, can you produce effectively if you do not have a good head on your shoulders? Probably not. You must think effectively in order to do things that will give you insight as to what needs to be done and how it needs to be done.


Poetry can be implemented in the classroom through the introduction of certain themes that will come about through the content. The poems must be culturally relevant to the students. The poems must give the readers a chance to fully engage with the text through the different modes – imagery, sounds, and feelings – that the poems provide.


References:


Silverstein, S. (2002). Where the sidewalk ends: the poems and drawings of Shel Silverstein.

New York, NY: HarperCollins Publishers.


Temple, C. A., Martinez, M. G., & Yokota, J. (2019). Children's Books in Children's Hands: an

introduction to their literature. NY, NY: Pearson.



 
 
 

3 Comments


Leticia Hale
Leticia Hale
Oct 21, 2019

Thank you for your enthusiastic interpretation of Where the Sidewalk Ends. I love how you found humor in many of the poems. I do agree with you that children enjoy humorous poetry and culturally relevant poetry. My students are all Latinx. I think instead of Where the Sidewalk Ends, I would ready poetry by Alma Flor Ada and Isabel F. Campoy. If you read my post, I was not a fan of Where the Sidewalk Ends as it really didn’t appeal to me. Therefore, I think it is very important that we expose students to various types of poetry as we would with any literature. I also like how you stated that you would include poetry throughout the school year…

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Rachel Keith
Rachel Keith
Oct 20, 2019

Melissa is so polite! Well done, Keith! I love the imagery ideas. It is so important to get our students on the right track to making sure they can create what is in their minds on paper. And the fact you mentioned the free-flowing form gets me thinking about music. So many students today have access to music and it is a huge part of their lives. Much different than the CD's we had to use back in the day. To keep them thinking about poetry, remind them that just like how they listen to music every day, the people that create their favorite songs are thinking about poetry and write it down, and put a tune to it and…

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Melissa Diaz-Trejo
Melissa Diaz-Trejo
Oct 20, 2019

Hi Keith,


I like how you mentioned that poetry could be “implemented in the classroom through the introduction of certain themes that will come about through the content.” I thought this was important because sometimes people think that poetry can be taught in one unit, and then moved on. I believe it is essential as educators to incorporate poetry throughout the whole year- this way; students are exposed to it various times and not just a week or two. There are so many parts to poetry; it seems impossible for students to practice and read about all of them in a short amount of time.


Shel Silverstein’s poetry books are lovely for students. The poems allow students to see differen…


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